Is it "bad" if it mention the following in my essay...

<p>Thanks everyone for all the great advice! It really means a lot. High school has been especially tough for me since practically no one in my family(extended as well) knows anything about four year colleges/universities. </p>

<p>I really want to get accepted to a good UC to make my family proud since I have comparable statistics to the average but I am afraid I won’t be able to afford it :frowning: Hopefully I can get some scholarships…</p>