<p>I gave some examples of conflicts around the world and how they have been affected me. Then, finished with a sentence saying that I want to study hard in UC Berkeley so I can prevent it.</p>
<p>Just say you are committed to study, and want to benefit the society. Basically that’s what they are looking for.</p>
<p>oorah87//
FYI, international students pay full tuition by themselves. Their tuitions are similar to a private school’s. To be precise, it’s the state government paying for the education not the federal government. That’s why out-of-state residents pay as much tuition as international students.</p>