January 2010 Writing Thread

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<p>I put the answer with “although.”</p>

<p>No. I read it over 10+ times it was EXACTLY the same, </p>

<p>“During the interview with a local news reporter” was just placed in front of the sentence in choice D as opposed to in the end in choice A</p>

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I don’t think you have it written right, but I put during an interview…cause the other one makes it sound as if the plan only takes place during the interview.</p>

<p>violin - your explanation makes sense…</p>

<p>3 wrong so far…</p>

<p>I read the interview one several times, the two were exactly the same wording.</p>

<p>To Silverturtle: was it D?</p>

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<p>Yes, I think so.</p>

<p>power, The principal announced a plan to build blahblah during an interview. This sentence sounds as if the principal is announcing to build something DURING that interview.</p>

<p>so is it A or E lol.</p>

<p>Does anyone remember the phrasing of the principal question</p>

<p>^780 probably (my guess)</p>

<p>violin’s explanation makes sense. It was D for the interview one</p>

<p>Reposting:</p>

<p>What did you guys put for the question with, roughly, “provided resources for photographers…” I marked “resources for” as wrong, thinking that it had to be “provided resources to.”</p>

<p>^silver,</p>

<p>was this the writing experimental?</p>

<p>How many fixing sentence questions for the 35 question passage did not need to be changed?</p>

<p>I put no error for that one, I think…^</p>

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<p>It’s looking that way.</p>

<p>There was</p>

<p>solar energy => delete from passage
It has problems, however => before sentence 9
In addition, people do not welcome </p>

<p>and that’s all I can remember for editing the paragraph part.</p>

<p>silver, i think resources for is correct. Do you remember in improving paragraphs a long sentence being “leave as is”?</p>

<p>3? thats how many I had.</p>