Kid can't write

<p>An important aspect of writing is the thesis sentence. So many poorly trained students will rashly write their thoughts down without any thought whatsoever to a thesis sentence. As a writer, clearly stating your argument or thought in the thesis statement followed by reasons, examples, and incidents to back up the thesis is indispensible to say the least.</p>

<pre><code> Sad, really. These high schoolers who are poor writers will really have a culture shock with those college essays.
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