My essay is 300 words too long. Can someone help me shorten it?

@sanjanagupta1 Not cool at all PMing this: “hey I’d be willing to take a look at your essay. I just submitted my app and know how annoying this process is lol.” One look at your recent posts has revealed to me that you are still currently writing your essay. The fact that you lied blatantly about the fact that you submitted your app makes me think you have malicious intentions of copying my entire essay. I understand you want a good essay (so do I!) but that’s not the way to do it.

Anyways, warning to people who are having others read their essays!!