My essay is 300 words too long. Can someone help me shorten it?

@asianfu actually no. I finalized my common app essay tonight, @assemblingphilosophies actually helped me a lot (I needed advice on a specific part of my essay and got what I was looking for). After she pmed me at 12:08 am, I edited my essay based on her edits and submitted my essay literally 3 minutes ago. I was only trying to help, jeez. I can pm you my essay if that makes you feel better… honestly you need to relax a little. I would never try to copy your essay as I’mv very happy with it and don’t need to copy it from someone saying theirs is 950 words. u need to chill out. don’t ask for help if you are so quick to look for the worst. sorry I offered to help lol. bye