<p>Good, although somewhat trite information at this point. I think you capture a tangible sense of “passion” well though. One thing I disagree profusely with -
Young teachers can easily write better letters than “seasoned pros”. Such a sweeping generalization is misleading. I think you should just trust whomever teacher that you have created a noteworthy bond with, barring extenuating circumstances (has not taught you in an academic course, cannot speak english, etc.).</p>