<p>I just called the NMSC, they girl said no changes are allowed. too bad 
. The school can see the essay but they can’t make any changes.
The people involved in the story were some of his teachers, it was like the teachers already gave up on the project, but the kids showed persistence and turned the project around be a successful one. I just hope that the readers won’t think my S is too arrogant since he is not.
Thanks for your response!</p>