You can make it shorter: Read it out aloud, have someone else read it too. Remove adjectives, use hyphenated words, change sentence structure, drop most if not all the “so”, “very” and “but”, …, add back spaces and periods.
Good luck.
You can make it shorter: Read it out aloud, have someone else read it too. Remove adjectives, use hyphenated words, change sentence structure, drop most if not all the “so”, “very” and “but”, …, add back spaces and periods.
Good luck.