I agree with @xoxojillianxo. Your essay doesn’t really tell unique thing about you. Pick an experience that intrigued you, ticked you, inspired you, angered you and expand the essay from there.
I agree with @xoxojillianxo. Your essay doesn’t really tell unique thing about you. Pick an experience that intrigued you, ticked you, inspired you, angered you and expand the essay from there.