<p>@redrabbit23
I’d say what’s more, but there are some who are convinced that it’s incidentally. </p>
<p>Consensus on ostrich being?</p>
<p>@redrabbit23 I’m pretty sure it’s “What’s more” because it means to add on or “furthermore.” The passage was like “the customers played the same songs over and over. _______, the employees were playing the same songs over and over.” What’s more adds on to that 1st sentence.</p>
<p>Is there any way to see the test after scores are released? </p>
<p>I can guarantee it was not incidentally. Not even close.</p>
<p>what do people think about the second to last top 40s passage improvement question in the large writing section? it asked about what to do with the last sentence of the passage.</p>
<p>I don’t see how on earth the answer could be incidentally. It’s not even remotely close to what the paragraph needed</p>
<p>there was a question about punctuation about what would author 2 say about something and the answer choices were creativity, workplace and something like that. anyone remember the question and/or possible answer? thanks</p>
<p>Guys what did “conceive” mean in the passage?
I put devise. I feel like there were many questions with 2 possible answers lol</p>
<p>i didn’t put devise because they weren’t really actively making the environment. I think I put some other choice where i didn’t know the meaning of the word. I think it was choice E. Does anyone remember?</p>
<p>I think one of the choices was descended</p>
<p>Do you guys remember any questions from improving paragraphs? I think I messed up that part</p>
<p>@JJLeeeeeee @jennathewhale yeah i found the paragraph improvement part is difficult… the last second one i chose no change leave as it is(question about the last sentence in the last paragraph)… and for 25 mins writing section i got so many Cs on the second row… I am so scared.</p>
<p>Someone email the college board about the “incidentally” and “what’s more” question. It’s stupid. </p>
<p>I think the last sentence needed the transition. That last sentence came from nowhere. The sentence before it was something like people ignored his achievement?</p>
<p>I put devise cause it said " conceived from nothing really" idk lol im so nervous after reading this thread</p>
<p>@2400boii do you remember other options>??? I have no idea what i chose now</p>
<p>If the second sentence was connected to the first sentence (adding relevant information etc) what’s more is correct. If the second sentence was not related and they were digressing to another point, incidentally is correct. Doesn’t seem like a flawed question to me… does anyone have the sentences?</p>
<p>@mystic7 i think it’s like first sentence: the customers liked listening to the same songs
second sentence: after closing, the staff chose to listen to the same tracks played during the day
so here, “what’s more” definitely strengthens the paragraph</p>
<p>I think what’s more is correct in that context. I didn’t take this test though so I won’t bet my life on it lol</p>
<p>@FailedHardAsian one other choice i remember is “descended”</p>