I agree with you, however, I think that it would be better as the focus of a letter of recommendation. As the theme of an essay, I think that there are potentially too many ways in which it could harm the OP’s chances.
I agree with you, however, I think that it would be better as the focus of a letter of recommendation. As the theme of an essay, I think that there are potentially too many ways in which it could harm the OP’s chances.