<p>Godot, are you sure about using scholary examples give better scores than personal examples? Well, I had a prompt about how individuals can change community or nation (or something similar to that). I said that individuals certainly CAN and SHOULD for my topic sentence. And for my examples, I used FDR vs. Hoover, LouAnne Johnson (a ex-navy teacher who helped kids in “wrong” way to come back to the “right” way; I explained that this action benefited the community by making it safer), and my personal example of working in Key Club’s Special Olympics. </p>
<p>I thought my examples varied enough (history, literary, and personal) because that’s what I’ve been told to do (I forgot where… bunch of sources). So you think I should just stick with history and literary examples only?</p>