Please grade my essay

<p>The old saying, “be careful what you wish for,” may be an appropriate warning. The drive to achieve a particular goal can dangerously narrow one’s perspective and encourage the fantasy that success in one endeavor will solve all of life’s difficulties. In fact, success can sometimes have unexpected consequences. Those who propel themselves toward the achievement of one goal often find that their lives are worse once “success” is achieved that they were before.</p>

<p>“Narrow ones perspective”
“success in one endeavor”
“will solve all of life’s difficulties”
“unexpected consequences”
“their lives are worse once success is achieved”</p>