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<p>Hoping for a bit of luck when admissions decisions are released! Anyway, I did the Play-doh to Plato one. Its a bit lengthy (hopefully not boring) but here it goes…</p>

<p>Whether one is comparing mathematical symbols to fruit-filled desserts, a John Travolta musical to Socrates’ home, or the very essence of a man to the bottoms of his feet, the task of finding a connection between two objects that, though they may sound the same, are actually very different seems like a daunting task, and the endeavor to find a pathway connecting Play-Doh to Plato is no different. However, this is more a result of an abundance of possibilities than a lack of them, for just as some may say that there are many paths to God, truth, or rapid weight loss, there are a plethora of passages between these two seemingly unrelated items. It is now, as endless possibilities spread out before me, that I must select a single path amongst thousands. As my eyes scan each possibility with care, they see the worn paths trampled harshly by many who simply followed the majority. Others have no more than a few sets of footprints tainting them, but they are equally unfit for my purposes. At last I see it, the lone path unblemished by the steps of man. Here is where my excursion begins.
As I proceed, each new step rouses the dirt of this previously flawless pathway. The first stop of my journey draws near in the form of an age-old profession that has endangered the lives of those involved with it for years. Yes, I am speaking of the perilous life of the chimney sweep, but what do Play-Doh and chimney sweeps have in common? Actually, the similarity is much more straightforward than one might think, for just as the primary job of a chimney sweep is to clear soot from chimneys, Play-Doh was actually originally designed to remove that very substance from wallpaper. Though I have only just arrived here at the first of many stops, its tainted air, ridden with ash and carcinogens, fills my lungs, and I must, as soon as my future walkway is determined, make haste. It would seem that there are many possible passages that lead onward from here. However, the child labor disputes of this profession result in nothing more than a dead end, and chimneys are a bore. Therefore, I feel that I must instead follow the footpath that leads toward a subject that has, thanks to such figures as Charles Dickens and William Blake, spoken often about the chimney sweep.<br>
Indeed, the next stop is none other than the world of English literature. Many great minds in the literary world have been produced in England, but there are none greater, at least in my mind, than that of William Shakespeare. At the mention of his immortal name, the earth itself seems to quake as the path before me spreads into many, forking outward in all possible directions. Yes, there are those obvious passages that lead through the streets of Verona, where love once led to suicide, or pass by that fortress called Elsinore, a place where ghosts of past kings roam. However, I shall instead select that road which leads, as it was once said that all do, to Rome in pursuit of Julius Caesar. Though his death is often portrayed in the play that bears his name, Caesar’s legacy goes far beyond that Shakespearean script. One of the most prominent figures in the development of the Roman Empire, his name is often associated with such characteristics as leadership, charisma, and military prowess. Yet even a man as great as he could not govern the empire singlehandedly. Though their alliance was unofficial, Caesar joined forces with Pompey and Crassus to form what is known as the First Triumvirate, a political coalition that ruled, as does that vicious hellhound Cerberus, with three heads. However, the collection of items into groups of three stretches far beyond the limited reach of either the political structure of ancient Rome or Greek mythology’s fictional beings. Nowadays, it has become clear that amigos, stooges, and celebrity deaths also tend to come in threes, but none of these seem to carry me any closer to the ultimate end of my ongoing odyssey. Perhaps the solution may be found in yet another set of three that involves one man’s theory of the human soul.<br>
Historically, the debate as to the state of the human soul seems to be one with no definite answer. One theory, known as the tripartite theory of the soul, attempted to explain it as being composed of three parts. These include the appetitive soul, which deals with base desires, the rational soul, the thinking part of man’s being, and the spirited soul, the portion of man responsible for his desire for victory and honor. Is it possible that this theory correctly describes the soul as it truly is? Could it really be that simple? I suppose so, but my purposes do not require an analysis of the validity of such a theory. Instead, its true importance can be found in the man who proposed the idea, none other than the final goal of my journey and one of the greatest philosophical minds to ever grace the earth with the workings of his mind, Plato.
My journey, it seems, has come to an end, and I look back upon it in silent wonder. Who knew such a path could exist between two subjects that once seemed to be so different? However, the mere completion of this endeavor is not what gives my heart satisfaction. It is more a result of my doing so in a way unique to my own mind, striking out on avenues where none have walked before me. That idea derives from a principle that is useful not only in this journey, but on any others that I may encounter in the future. Perhaps it can best be illustrated in a quote by John D. Rockefeller, who once stated, “If you want to succeed you should strike out on new paths, rather than travel the worn paths of accepted success.”</p>

<p>^nwang229 that is definitely one hell of an essay. I salute you, man.</p>

<p>I also chose Prompt #6. I was going to post this after I got my decision, but now that I think about it, it shouldn’t really matter:</p>

<p>Nowadays, it seems as if it is becoming harder and harder to get accepted to a good college, mostly because of the huge numbers of qualified applicants. How does one distinguish oneself from the piles of other supremely competent applicants? One’s scores could be high, but those mean nothing in the face on intangibles like personalities, especially since in the upper echelons the difference between two people could be a single question on the SAT. Colleges recognize the need to eliminate some students, even though they did nothing wrong - there just wasn’t enough space.</p>

<p>Universities ultimately want to make the right decision, but to be able to do that, they have to know as much as they can about the applicant. Will he be a good fit for our university? Is there some deep dark secret he doesn’t want us to know about? Why did he choose to take band instead of AP German (for what it’s worth, I didn’t take either)? With just a small space for students to express themselves, is there some underlying way for colleges to see which students are the most motivated?</p>

<p>My devious suggestion (or the truth as some would claim): optional essays. Not only does the college get a chance to peer into the students’ life some more, but it also eliminates the students who aren’t motivated enough to complete that final essay. If a student truly cared enough about the college, would they not want to show that university all that they are? Only the truly lazy would not want to write extra. And those undesirables are unwanted anyway.</p>

<p>“But wait!” you might exclaim. “What about those who have nothing to add to their application?” Can such a scenario exist? Is there not something a person could write, especially if the prompt is as wide open as it is, especially when it is simply to write about one’s favorite things? Most people could easily give a speech on the subtleties of their favorite TV shows. The more musically talented have sung about their joys, whether “raindrops on roses or whiskers on kittens”.</p>

<p>Essays are also easier to organize than interviews – no messy forms and the such: just an extra essay to read. Why would colleges not take advantage of such a masterful plan? Perhaps they have, and this conspiracy exists. Is it true, then? Does the University of Chicago use optional essays, with a clearly written “optional” next to the prompt, to see the more motivated students?</p>

<p>Administrators would of course deny, deny, deny. “It’s only to if you want to show more of yourself, not for the college to apply a crude, elementary, probably-inconclusive technique to the many applications we receive each year. Who knows why someone did not send in the optional essay? It would be like trying to investigate the motivations behind a person’s ‘like’ on Facebook,” says the imaginary antagonist in my head.</p>

<p>Explain to me why then so many of my fellow students feel the need to complete the optional essay. Not one has simply refused to turn it in, regardless of the quality of the essay. “Better than nothing” they shrug. And yet others try to simply reuse their answers from another prompt. Does this really show the true side of students? And yet my brethren continue to do this, laboring under the delusion that writing the optional essay shows motivation. They would not dream of ignoring a request from the college they desire so much.</p>

<p>But, unlike my comrades, I have won. I may have written the optional essay, but I did so on my terms. I can veritably state that it was one of the most fun essays I have written so far. I did not write it out of a desperation to show my worth to my favorite college; I did it to please myself. So while the admissions council may think that their ruse has worked, I know better.</p>

<p>So reject me if that is your wont, but I know I have won. I see your rejection and raise you my self-fulfillment. I know that my rejection comes not as a rejection of myself as a person, but only as the revenge for my uncovering of American colleges’ greatest conspiracy.</p>

<p>My essay ran a little long…</p>

<p>University of Chicago Essay Option Three:
“Spanish poet Antonio Machado wrote, ‘Between living and dreaming there is a third thing. Guess it.’ Give us your guess.</p>

<p>Inspired by Jill Hampshire, AB’08”</p>

<p>Standing between what we dream and what we live every day is a third thing: economics. From the Greek oikonomos, economics’ etymology proves telling. Oikonomos means literally the manager of a household and this meaning gets quickly to the heart of what economics is; economics, clearly pertinent to the running of a household, is the study of how society distributes its scarce resources. In a sense, this means how a society decides which dreams to realize.</p>

<p>Economics is, as a result, an all-encompassing discipline and it is only fitting that it should be that third thing. When one considers the working definition of economics, as well as some of its central tenets (that people face trade-off for instance), it becomes clearer what that definition really means, and why only economics may occupy such a grand position in the larger scheme of things. Economics, more than anything else, is about what we do in response to tradeoffs, in response to scarcity; how we deal with our inability to have it all—how we make choices.</p>

<p>This of course, thrusts economics front and center into a debate much larger than any social science. Because economics is a way to analyze choices between things that may lack clear intrinsic values, it asks much of us. Economics requires that we have clearly defined values, preferably quantifiably so, in order to allow us to make a rational and complete comparison of cost and benefit, as this is how economists make choices: thorough, marginal cost-benefit analysis.</p>

<p>Enter philosophy. How do we choose values? And, for those who reject the seemingly existential path this discussion leads us down, are there choices?</p>

<p>In part, my interest in economics stems from these questions as well as the rest of its nature. Economics is decidedly logical, often relying on mathematical relationships to describe various trade-offs. Just open any economics textbook and you’ll see; graphs abound. However, unlike many mathematical and scientific disciplines economics has no right answer. While I concede that there are many open questions in biology, chemistry, math, etc. I do hold that there is an intrinsic correct answer in a sense that economics can never rival. That is because economic analysis depends upon people and upholds the seemingly bizarre principle of analysis that people behave rationally. Ceterus Paribus: famous last words.</p>

<p>That’s where my interest in economics comes from, and that is, I believe, telling of my preferences for thinking and learning. I enjoy those disciplines which embrace multiple ways of thinking and which, like economics, stand on the border between the ordered scientific way of thought, and the chaos that we call the humanities. Further, I enjoy drawing those connections myself and attempting to think across disciplines, not within them. If you want an interesting spin on physics, take a leap of faith; if you want interesting rhetoric, demand scientific precision; if you want anything to be new or interesting or different, substitute in your own way of thinking—a new conceptual framework for what may seem to be a dried up discipline.</p>

<p>Thus economics stands, symbolically and literally between living and dreaming.
Literally, It stands in the way of our abilities to realize our dreams (damn you scarcity!), be it limited financial means, a scarcity of time, or, as you and I know all too well, a limited number of places in a college class. In the more symbolic sense, it is economics that bridges the academic gap between the down to earth sense of urgency and of reality that often pervades the sciences (theoretical physics aside) and the more wishy-washy disciplines (not to offend any English majors in the crowd, but economic chauvinism is sort of my thing). It is not that I dislike either of these extremes. Instead, it is that I love them both so much that I cannot accept the choice; I cannot deal with the scarcity of academic opportunities. As the greatest philosopher of the modern era wrote, “You are free, therefore choose”, so I choose the science of choices, in the hopes of both living and dreaming.</p>

<p>Chicago’s my top choice now, but I don’t like my essay :’(</p>

<p>Essay Option 3: Spanish poet Antonio Machado wrote, ‘Between living and dreaming there is a third thing. Guess it.’ Give us your guess.</p>

<p>According to the Many-Worlds Interpretation of Quantum Mechanics, everything that is thinkable exists. In some parallel universe, but it does. Between the time I brush my teeth and let the moonlight creep my room out, I have brought to existence many a universes in which I did not brush my teeth, clip my hair, drink the milk or say my prayers. But I don’t dream of these other universes. I dream of speaking ducks and the Hadron Collider and spilled ink and cashmere shawls, and sometimes, of Jeanie. What is the bridge that carries me from a real, plausible world to an unreal, mostly plausible world?</p>

<p>Freud would say it’s ‘wish-fulfillment.’ I think it’s will; a will based on accessibility of resources and willingness to sweat. I certainly want to be the President of India, but I wouldn’t dream of it. Do I have the resources? Probably, not very accessibly. Is the investment heavy? Yes; it needs a lot of energy. Are the returns on investment thrilling? Probably, but not very to my taste. So, I don’t bother dreaming of that. </p>

<p>There is a little economist in all of us that banks on the parameters by which we describe personalities - passion (heavily weighted), profit (probably the most important parameter), security, social appeal, necessity etc. No, we’re not just a certain kind of person. We have a natural predisposition to some things, and it is the conscious beast of will that prioritizes these realities; uses genetic and social and conditional and economic algorithms to make us want a reality we can achieve by taking certain measures, makes us dream of them, makes the dreams beautiful, so beautiful that we drive towards achieving their realization - through what we call willpower.</p>

<p>To will: to want what you want.</p>

<p>When did you last take responsibility for your aesthetic preferences? When did you last feel the need to justify your love for black over white? When were you last happy that you loved exactly whom you loved? When did you last give explicit permission to the gnomes of your consciousness to take you from living a reality to dreaming a possibility?</p>

<p>The gap between your thoughts and imagination - that’s the magnitude of your courage, your will. And I dream of simplifying the quest of a unified theory by assuming a unified theory from which I detract reality. But I only live in Newton’s simple equations. My will, my want, my love for my desires shape my psychedelic dreams. And if you ask me to answer this another time, I would give a different answer altogether. Welcome to my objectively subjective world.</p>

<p>wow, i really appreciate it! i hope the admissions people feel the same way about it…</p>

<p>This was my favorite uni essay at the time of writing it… now, after reading all the other ones, my confidence is officially displaced with self-consciousness. (Btw not yet accepted. Waiting for RD.)</p>

<p>Perception’s Lens</p>

<p>I remember the first time I visited the optical store at the intersection of Living Avenue and Dreaming Boulevard. </p>

<p>“Welcome to Perception’s Lens!” said Mr. Percy, the short, stocky optometrist. He looked down at me and pinched my cheeks. “A new customer, I see! What a precious little girl you are! I have the perfect pair for you.” He reaches into the display case and retrieves a tiny pair of white, foggy glasses that he precariously set on my nose. </p>

<p>“But I can hardly see the world with these, mister!” I protested. The silhouette wagged his finger at me. “That’s precisely the point, Grace! You’re eyes aren’t ready to see the world clearly yet. Run along and I’ll see you next time.”</p>

<p>I walked out the doors holding my mother’s hand, relying on her guidance to find my way home. In my room, I was safe from the vast world I couldn’t make sense of. I picked up my Barbie, the most beautiful thing I ever laid eyes on. In my eyes, she was a regal queen, ruling her kingdom with unmatched elegance and grace from her idyllic castle on the mountaintop. </p>

<p>It wasn’t long before the glasses became too small and I excitedly dragged my mother by her sleeves to the optometrist for my long-awaited second pair.</p>

<p>“Grace, look at you! You’re almost as tall as your mother,” proclaimed Mr Percy. “You’ll love these yellow specks. Go on, try them on!” </p>

<p>Suddenly, I could see it all. The queens weren’t on sprawled on my bedroom floor with their faces frozen in a senseless grin. They were striding across the high school hallways in their high-heeled shoes while their Prince Charmings held their chemistry textbooks. I saw the warriors, armed with their shoulder pads and helmets, preparing to fight for our nation’s honor. I witnessed duels to win the affections of damsels and secret scandals between the ladies-in-waiting. Soon enough, the glasses became disorientating, and I returned to Perception’s Lens for my periodic check-up.</p>

<p>“Hmm… what about these?” Mr. Percy held up a pair of black-rimmed glasses and juxtaposed them with my face. I slid them on my nose and noticed Mr. Percy was shorter than I remembered. In fact, everything was smaller, and I suddenly felt tall. “Thanks, Mr. Percy,” I grinned. He smiled and told me to enjoy these glasses while I could. I didn’t know what he meant. I planned on wearing these glasses forever.</p>

<p>I triumphantly walked onto the street with the wind in my hair. I swiftly hailed a taxi to take me to the bustling metropolis where I would establish myself. I was invincible, and everywhere I looked I saw ladders I could climb to reach the top of the world. I stopped at the foot of the tallest ladder I could find and began climbing the rungs determinedly. One day, I spotted a handsome young man on the adjacent ladder who handed me a pair of rose-tinted glasses. When I put them on, the restless city evaporated, and the ladders dispersed into tiny dust particles that rearranged themselves into Juliet’s balcony. The world was a glorious pink haze as I watched it unfold in slow motion.</p>

<p>I woke up one day and discovered that I had misplaced my rose-tinted glasses. I leaned over the balcony, scanning the vicinity wildly with my blurry vision, and suddenly lost my footing. I fell into the white abyss, flailing my arms wildly until I hit the soft, cushiony front lawn of Perception’s Lens. I staggered into the store and requested a replacement pair of glasses.</p>

<p>“It’s been a while since I last saw you, Grace. I think these specks will do the trick.” He presented me with a pair of clear glasses. Hesitantly, I opened my eyes and saw the world from another new perspective. “Thank you, Mr. Percy,” I said as I walked out the doors. “I think these are my favorite glasses yet.” </p>

<p>The new glasses neither hindered my vision nor distorted reality. Through them, I recognized the flaws and attributes of each individual present in my life - including myself. I could see the inevitable comings and goings of friends, the occasional insurmountable obstacle, and humor in every seemingly hopeless situation. I soon found myself neglecting to wear them entirely; I could see perfectly fine without them. I decided it was time to pay one last visit to Mr. Percy.</p>

<p>I pulled my town car from my driveway on 210 Living Street and began driving towards Dreaming Boulevard. I suddenly hit the brakes, bewildered by my epiphany: after 3 hours of driving down Living Street, I realized that Dreaming Boulevard would never approach again.</p>

<p>To be honest, whether I end up accepted or not, UC’s essays made for such enjoyable writing (especially after about a dozen “Why do you feel X is right for you” or “What could you bring to Y”) that I’ll still consider it a positive experience.</p>

<p>Here’s mine, for what it’s worth. Feedback is craved (admissions related or otherwise :slight_smile: )</p>

<p>Essay Option 3: Spanish poet Antonio Machado wrote, ‘Between living and dreaming there is a third thing. Guess it.’ Give us your guess.</p>

<p>If I believed in destiny, this question would have me buzzing in all sorts of ways. Of the many refreshingly original options available for these essays (other admissions departments please take note), it was this prompt which drew an immediate response from me, a sort of visceral reaction which I find often signposts the most promising topics. Add the fact that it is constructed around a quote spoken by my countryman Antonio Machado, and I could not have chosen another subject.</p>

<p>To me, what lies between living and dreaming is, undoubtedly, literature. “Ah” the pedants cry “you can´t paint. You´ll never make a good film. Of course you’d say it’s literature”. Fair point. I’d better explain myself.Literature lies squarely between living and dreaming because it combines elements of both. Even the most diligent fiction writer, overseen by the most risk-averse legal department,
cannot help but draw from real experiences, people or places as he plies his craft. In the same way, non-fiction works can perhaps be created without dreaming but require at least some imagination to be fully enjoyed when read.</p>

<p>Ernest Hemingway said “All good books are alike in that they are truer than if they had really happened”. While our waking lives may be full of dishonesty, and (if you subscribe to Freud) our dreams cannot help but reveal the truth, writing drives a middle path between the two, truer than our subjective, unilateral lives but less so than dreams, unconstrained as dreams are by taboos, shame, or other such social constraints.</p>

<p>When we read literature, especially higher-quality examples of it, we are in a way invited into the authors daydream, glimpsing a scene which is crystal clear and defined in his mind and which he endeavors to transmit to us through nothing more than paper and ink.</p>

<p>Speaking from personal experience, producing literature (if my efforts thus far can be considered that) involves living a dream. Provoked by a real life situation, I allow myself to consider an alternate reality, courses of action and characters that I could only engage in dreams, building on my live foundations walls and ceilings composed of dreams, albeit dreams grounded in living opinion, memory and experience.</p>

<p>This is then, a heavily personalized response. I realize that for others it may be photography that is more strongly situated between lives and dreams, or theatre, or whatever creative outlet they are most capable of unleashing their imaginations to run wild in. But my particular guess, to answer Mr. Machado’s challenge, is that between living and dreaming
there is literature. Writing it or reading it, it provides a middle ground on which to enjoy the advantages of both.</p>

<p>Well, the decisions come out in less than 3 days. UChicago suddenly became my number one choice for some reason. Good luck to everyone! </p>

<p>Prompt: The living and dreaming one…Something like that. I forgot…</p>

<p>ARMY RULES DETRIOT; 23 DIE
Home Fired, Shop looted in race riots
Detroit, Mich, Jun. 21, 1943 – Fully equipped and mechanized United States troops moved to Detroit tonight, fought a pitched battle at an apartment hotel…</p>

<pre><code> The headline of today’s Chicago Daily Tribune discomforted people, including Charles, who just delivered his last pile of newspapers to an office building near State Street. Before he unlocked the rusty bike, Charles inserted his right hand into the paper-round bag, making sure that pile of newspapers was his last for today. Wandering back and forth, his right hand touched nothing except a handmade model aircraft at the very bottom. The model aircraft was the famous Kawanishi N1K-J Shiden, or “George”, the one that the Japanese used to wreak havoc on the continent of China in 1942. The dream of being a pilot was untouchable, unrealistic and somehow ironic to an eleven-year-old paperboy from 47th Street. He made the model aircraft by hand three months ago, and brought it with him every morning as his only entertainment.
Charles then put on a gray flat cap, unlocked the bike, and sailed the aircraft over his head as he ran through the crowds. People were struck by the contrast between Charles’s unusual happiness and the children’s innocent frowns on the war bond posters. The country was at war; race riots were everywhere; living was simply hell. Charles finally came to a stop in front of the road crossing on East Washington Street, where cars and trucks were bustling against each other. On the opposite side, the copper green Great Clock at Marshall Field glared at Charles.
It was six thirty-five.
Charles realized he missed breakfast again this morning. Now his stomach was hurting like never before – today was his thirteenth day of missing breakfasts and lunches. Keeping an arm on his stomach, Charles tried but failed to soften the pain. He carried his paper-round bag and the bike to a crowed bakery at the corner. There was a glass window divided Charles and the newly baked loafs of breads. Charles could not resist the warmness and the golden color on the breads. He needed food to survive. He needed food to carry on life. A price tag underneath the breads howled ninety cents per loaf. Swiftly parking his bike near the door, Charles grabbed all of the coins from his pocket he made today, and counted them, penny by penny. They all added up to only seventy-seven cents. He remained mute, as the pain in his stomach worsened.
“I need to eat”, Charles said to himself. “Can I just steal? Can I?”
His mind is made up. Charles stepped into the bakery, where lines and lines of adults were waiting to pay. The bread was on the left-hand side of the store, near the entrance. He slipped through the crowd, his conscious eyes examining the counter, the floor and the people. Everything was propitious. Both customers and the cashier were clear for Charles to steal. He carefully extended his right hand towards the rack of breads, and ready to grab the nearest loaf that he could touch…
No. He could not do this.
Standing in the midst of tall adults, thinking through his next move, Charles reached his pocket to get the seventy-seven cents, and bravely walked up to the cashier with a loaf of bread. The adults’ chatting ceased at once, as this little boy’s line cutting angered them. The cashier gave him a leer, and then he weaved. Charles understood the cashier gave him the bread for free. He gave a brief bow and ran out of the store.
“Tom, why did you not charge him anything for that loaf of bread?” The lady at the very front asked. Other customers began chitchatting amongst themselves.
“That kid was trying to steal a loaf of bread a few minutes ago,” Tom responded while he was processing the lady’s payment, “I was about to call the cops.”
The lady gasped.
“But then I saw he stepped back, and, maybe he felt bad, and he didn’t want to steal anymore,” Tom continued, “But he looked kind of sick. So, I just changed my mind, and just charged him nothing. Hopefully this bread will make him feel better.”
The lady nodded, not only for understanding, but also for appreciation.
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<pre><code> It was the end of January, when the snow loved to cluster around the bottom of trees. Charles brought his second grandson, who just turned seven, to Grant Park to celebrate the coming of the spring. He was sitting on a bench, reading today’s Chicago Tribune.
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<p>Bush Enlarges Case For War By Linking Iraq With Terrorists
WASHINGTON, Jan 28, 2003 – President Bush, enlarging the case for going to war with Iraq soon, said tonight that there was intelligence showing that Iraq was helping and protecting terrorists…</p>

<pre><code>He sipped a mouthful of coffee. The words “war”, “terrorists”, “Iraq” resounded in his head as he read along the column. Our country was at war again; religious conflict was everywhere; living was simply hell.
“Andrew,” Charles gently wiggled his palm. Andrew put his bat aside, and ran towards Charles. Charles pulled out an aged yet clear picture from his wallet, and ready to show it to his grandson.
“This was me in the picture. You grandpa was once a pilot.” The picture had Charles standing in front of an airplane, with a bright uniform and a pilot hat.
“Wow! Grandpa, you looked like Captain America!”
“Haha. Drew, you know, sometimes you have to make the right choice in life.”
“Right choice?” The terms perplexed Andrew, “Like picking the right one between two things?”
“Yes,” Charles pointed to the corner of a commercial building near South State Street. “That corner used to be a bakery. When I was eleven, my stomach hurt badly in the morning, so I tried to steal a loaf of bread in there. But I didn’t, because I knew it was wrong, even though I needed food to live, to survive at that time. ”
“Then what happened?”
“I then went up to the cashier, with my only seventy-seven cents and a bag of bread…it costs, you know, only ninety cents to buy a loaf of bread in those days…And the cashier was a nice gentlemen. He ended up giving me the bread for free.”
Andrew was still listening.
“Although I felt better after eating the bread,” Charles continued, “this is not the thing that I was most grateful about. I was grateful about how I gave up stealing the bread, and…”
Andrew interrupted, “What about if you did not put the bread down? You still get to eat, right, grandpa?”
“No. If I didn’t put the bread down, I’d be in jail for at least two years, I’d not be at school, I’d not be a pilot, your dad would not be here, then you would not be here, and I would not be your grandpa! My life changed with just putting the bread down. It all happened in one second. So, Drew, make the right choice.”
“Make the right choice,” Andrew said it again with affirmative tone while playing the snow.
Grandpa touched the Andrew’s head, and smiled. “That’s my boy!”

Between living and dreaming, there is choosing.
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<p>What do you guys think? Thumbs up or not?</p>

<p>@ckpckp holy crap, i think that’s pretty good! did you write that…? wowzers! </p>

<p>Admitted EA. After reading the others, mine, by far, pales in comparison :/</p>

<p>Between living and dreaming one: </p>

<pre><code> “I had a dream” has the word cliché written all over it. Despite this fact, the phrase is heard in everyday life, and the hope behind the voice rings true. Indeed, several things could fall between living and dreaming (most notably sleeping…), but hope can be considered one of the most important concepts that fall in between living and dreaming.
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<p>Imagine a time you woke up from a particularly realistic dream, beads of sweat dotting your forehead from the realness of it. You recalled the dream, and knew that you wanted to make it happen. Day in and day out for the following weeks, you attempted in various situations to recreate the dream, no matter how foolish you looked while doing so. As you proceeded through the weeks and months, though, one major motivator pushed you to reach your goal of making your dream a reality: hope—hope that your goal will come to fruition. </p>

<p>Hope is the dessert to dreams and an appetizer to life. It is a satisfying descendant to dreams that fuel one to have hope, and it is also a remarkable predecessor to life, pushing one to make one’s dreams come true. </p>

<p>Dreams can be compared to an idea, one that comes out-of-the-blue and takes one by surprise. Hope is part of the planning process, where one strives to see his or her dreams come to life. Hope is always there keeping a watchful eye as one plans, fueling a person when he or she starts to slow down. Life is the sweet prize that comes after the planning, the event that shows a person that never losing hope and fighting for his or her goals are always worth it. </p>

<p>Throughout the course of one’s life, he or she may remember numerous dreams, either for its realistic, detrimental effects or for its seemingly unrealistic possibilities. In my short life of 17 years, I have retained several dreams in my memory (getting chased by a giant green dinosaur is one of my earliest and most memorable ones), but one, in particular, has stuck with me. In this dream, my grandfather appeared, and told me, “Always reach for the sky, and never lose hope. Once you’ve lost hope, you’ve lost everything.” Those words stuck with me for the past five years of my life, always reinserting itself into my mind at the slight sign of forgetting it. With this quote, I have become the person I am today, as I pushed myself to the limit, with hope leading me along the way in making all my (more realistic) dreams come true. </p>

<p>At a time like this, the majority of seniors may have only one thing on their mind: sleep—the most important thing that lies between living and dreaming for most seniors these days. However, if one were to dig deeper into what may lie between living and dreaming, he or she may come across several derivatives of the same concept: hope. Hope will always be there for those who seek it, picking him or her up whenever he or she falls down, and helping him or her to make any and all dreams their life—to make it reality. For some, it is hard to persevere when he or she continuously falls down, but as my grandfather said, keep the hope, because without it, you will lose everything.</p>

<p>The topic is the living and dreaming one. Feedback would be nice! Although after reading some of these other essays, geez…I hope mine’s at least close :)</p>

<p>Behold the silent forestry of North Korea, where I tread surreptitiously through the mist to deliver food to a starving family. Behold the brainwashed world of Aldous Huxley’s Brave New World, where I play the part of Bernard and attempt to discover my true purpose in an environment of delusion and apathy. Behold the birds of the sky, who join me on my migration to the fjords of the Norwegian tundra. Then my unfinished glass of lemonade, slippery with an hour’s worth of condensation, tips over and awakens me to a snickering sister and silently chuckling parents frolicking in the back yard. I return to reality. My chain of chimeras cease to exist for the time being. I sigh, silently curse the Newtonian theory of gravity, and trudge inside to change my soaked jeans. I leave behind the portal to my dreams and the cradle of my fantasies, my patio chair. This simple piece of porch furniture, purchased from Target, provides the answer to Antonio Machado’s quandry of what lies between the activities of living and dreaming. What lies between these two facets of life is not a separate action, but rather a bridge between them which intertwines living and dreaming into an interdependent entity. This bridge is nothing more than an old rusty patio chair that squeaks whenever I sit on it.
Each man requires a means of connection from the down-to-earth reality of life to the abstract realm of dreams and aspirations, and each man’s bridge is different and unique. People dream of utopia-esque versions of life and goals which they hope to achieve at in the future, and people live in order to get as close to reaching these dreams as possible. Although many individuals may believe that living and dreaming may coexist simultaneously, true living and true dreaming must be independent. Sure, a man may daydream, but if he wishes to survive his trip to work on a rainy day (or a trek across the Korean Demilitarization Zone, for that matter), he probably should not be deeply pondering the intrinsic meaning of his life in an extremely involved dream. In order for true revelations to be made, in order for groundbreaking epiphanies to catalyze, and in order for the life’s future to be defined, a state of meditation must be achieved which nests and nurtures the dreams of the dreamer. Picture the act of dreaming, whether asleep or in a pensive awakened state, as time travel. Marty McFly and Doc Brown (since I’m sure the movie Inception has been overused for this topic) would not have been able to enter the life outside of their lives of the present without the DeLorean. As it relates to the reality outside of Hollywood, one cannot enter the peaceful and beneficial state of dreaming without a way of getting there. For me, the patio chair bathed in the sunlight which is filtered through the leaves of a gigantic oak is my capsule to worlds where I am perpetually successful. For others, countless other possibilities exist as bridges to dreamland. Just don’t fall asleep while going 88 miles per hour in a DeLorean.
Today’s fast-paced and strenuous society has sadly demolished the bridge between life and dreams for countless individuals around the planet. The mainstream answer to the woes of a lack of a creative and foresightful mind is a long, expensive vacation to “revive” and “replenish” the childlike bounty of fantasy. This so-called panacea is overindulgent and unneeded. All one requires in order to enter the meadows of dreams is a way to get there. A bridge. Whether it is a comfortable recliner or a thoughtful hike through a favorite stretch of the Appalachian Trail, this bridge can be the escape pod to a state of mind which satisfies fantasies and sets out paths towards the future. So the next time you see patio furniture on sale at IKEA, don’t pass it up. It may transform you. And it’ll match your porch’s beige paint brilliantly.</p>

<p>Thepathoflife… amazing essay !!!</p>

<p>Spanish poet Antonio Machado wrote, ‘Between living and dreaming there is a third thing. Guess it.’ Give us your guess.</p>

<p>If living is a function we would have to define it with sin x. We as humans more or less seem to have a time when we hit peak performance during the day, local maximum, and inevitably slip into the unconscious state that is sleeping, local minimum. It would be foolish to assume that mere sleep equals dreaming; for that we would have to create another function. Since REM sleep, the cause of dreams, usually occurs deep into the night, it makes sense that our dream function is -sin x as it reflects sin x values.
Looking at the functions graphically, one of the most obvious features of it is the area created between these two trigonometric functions. Not only are the rice grain-like shapes look aesthetically pleasing, they also raise a question: What does it mean to derive something?
In order to find the area between these two functions we have to integrate them. To integrate them we must find the anti derivative which implies the concept of differentiation. When we derive something, we simplify things. (e.g. speed to distance, 4-d to 3-d) It only seems to reason that anti-differentiation would have the opposite effect: something intellectually stimulating and refreshing. What could this sublime sensation be?
Of course then there’s the doubt of whether we are even asking the right question. What if Machado’s third thing is not a product/end result but the mode of achieving said end product? We look at the fundamental theorem of calculus and see that this powerful theorem -that has bound mathematics separated by millennia- is strangely simple yet elegant. Perhaps the thing between living and dreaming is not a complicated-yet stimulating- concept that everyone can share regardless of who they are. It may be as simple as something like laughter shared with friends or the rich cup of hot chocolate you had in the morning.
Then there’s the argument that whatever is between living and dreaming is not merely a mode or product but a force all together. -Sin x is the second derivative of sin x. Then the first derivative of sin x in the middle, cos x, would be our third unknown force. Looking back into our graph it almost makes sense of how cos x which crosses with the two functions at less aesthetically pleasing spots can act as a mediator between living and dreaming. The strange spots where cos x, our third force touches sin x, living and -sinx, dreaming could represent the seeming strange but daily occurrences where dreams and living combine to make goals, pledges or moments of success.
In the end, we are left with multiple answers to the Machado’s challenge each with their own unique takes and attacks. As a seventeen year old student, I find it hard to make such a tremendous philosophical question and life at large for myself much less have an objective stance on the issue. In the end, all I can see is that life is beautiful from whatever angle we approach it from and that all of us humans are fundamentally the same no matter what the variables are. </p>

<p>Could only find very first draft but really didn’t edit too much anyway. Sorry! Xp</p>

<p>Isurus, I didn’t write the optional essay :p</p>

<p>And I heard you got in, congrats :D.</p>

<p>Yeahh, I was actually more along the lines of Harvard’s ‘optional’ essay, based on what I saw on that forum, about how people stressed over it and a lot of people said it was mandatory. Not to go off-topic from the thread, but does anyone have any comments on that? Did anyone actually write the optional essay for those reasons?</p>

<p>^^ I kind of felt like an optional essay wasn’t actually optional and that it was meant to weed out applicants. But obviously i’m dumb and people got in without writing it. I think my optional essay was dang good though and really showed who I was because I wrote it in a different way than just saying what my favorite stuff was. I wrote it like a “day in the life of me” as I was doing all these things and listening/reading/watching all the things I like.</p>

<p>I did the Antonio machado one, i wish i was more creative but hey why not right? lol this was just a rough draft but the concept is there, personal experience + essay question + randomness </p>

<p>Antonio Machado, a 19th century Spanish poet and author of such poems as “Last Night As I Was Sleeping”, “Has My Heart Gone To Sleep”, and “Is my Soul Asleep”, once wrote, “Between living and dreaming there is a third thing. Guess it.” After reading Machado’s poetry, it is difficult to contemplate his statement without introspection and deeply abstract thought. A phase between living and dreaming could be living life to the fullest but allowing oneself to not be bothered by the harshness and obstructions of reality, or going through life in a dream-like daze, never truly living anything to the fullest at all; however based on Machado’s obvious interest in sleep and dreams, I believe that he suffered from a deficiency of Hypocretin, some slight genetic abnormalities, and simply was a little tired.
Hypocretin is a peptide that regulates activity in the hypothalamus region of the brain, the region that regulates appetite, sleep, fatigue, and body temperature. Recent studies have shown that in the presence of slight genetic abnormalities and an environmental trigger, a lack of Hypocretin directly correlates with an individual having Narcolepsy, a chronic sleep disorder characterized by excessive daytime sleepiness and sudden, uncontrollable sleep attacks. One common symptom is Hypnagogic hallucinations, a transitional stage between wakefulness, “living”, and sleeping, “dreaming”. Hypnagogic hallucinations occur at the threshold of consciousness, which means that he/she is aware of what is going on around him/her, perhaps the drone of a television or the voice of a teacher, but simultaneously can hear or see things that are not really there.<br>
For example, a man may be sitting on the metro commuting to work when he starts to nod off. He can hear the chatter of others on the bus, the commotion of traffic, and see the other commuters around him; when all of a sudden, the man notices a plastic bag blowing around the bus. None of the other commuters notice the bag floating around their heads and then with a pop it disappears and the man quizzically shakes himself from his daydream-esque reverie, pretending the strange bag never existed at all. In most cases, people who are susceptible to these hallucinations explain them away, ignore them, or use the hallucinations as a creative tool. Hypnagogic Hallucinations can manifest themselves in any form, from moving shadows to psychedelic colors hovering in the air. This transitional stage between living and dreaming is what Antonio Machado is discussing in his poems.
Machado’s poetic style, indicative of vivid images and marvelous illusions, perhaps is a testament to the symptoms associated with Narcolepsy. The “third thing” between living and dreaming is a combination of the two, an unexplainable experience that allows Machado to pull the beauty of his oneiric fantasies into physical existence.</p>

<p>My first essay was about plato and play doh, but after being deferred EA I went on a crazy idea spree and decided to respond to ALL 6 prompts with a 1 page essay and uploaded that. Got accepted RD so maybe it worked. I personally felt it was a little too academic though, despite my attempts to inject humor and cynicism into it. Ironically, the seed of inspiration for this essay came from another more “normal” essay I wrote for other colleges:</p>

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<li>By describing your non-scientific process, connect Play-Doh with Plato , guess the third thing in between living and dreaming, and write about something you found while not looking for. Please don’t write about reverse psychology.</li>
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<p>I love lies. Making lies, consuming lies, playing with lies. Different types of lies include poetry, paintings, and even string theory. Let me tell you more about my lovely lies.</p>

<p>All lies require one common ingredient: the love of mistakes. Once when printing a poem on a manual letterpress, I accidently put two sheets of paper on top of each other. The sheet above did not touch the ink on the lead type. As a result, instead of being inked, it was beautifully embossed, colorless yet visible. Now when I display the poem, I put both inked and embossed sheets side by side as one work. As artists, or even scientists and writers, we may pretend we are in control of our work/lies. But actually, we live off ideas found by accident. JK Rowling conceived of Happy Potter riding a train to London. Neils Bhor formed his quantum superposition theory looking at Picasso’s cubist paintings. I obtained ideas for this essay browsing a convenience store. To be a good liar, you must constantly find inspiration, even when not looking for it. </p>

<p>Everybody is a liar, even Scientists, whom you’d think would be more concerned with the truth. I respect scientists, but I think they are actually artists in disguise. I admit on the surface, the artistic process seems nothing like the scientific process. But at a deeper level, the thinking involved both are the same. As scientists and artists, we both milk our imaginations to come up with things. The only difference between the artistic milking and the scientific milking is that the scientists pass their milk through the machine of ‘empirical proof’ where they use experimental data to back up their lies. Most of the time, it seems to work. But sooner or later, inconvenient anomalies could always happen and expose their scandal. Many thought Newton found the true laws of motion but then it failed to explain the orbit of mercury. Even now after Einstein came up with General Relativity and explained it, there are disturbing whispers of faster-than-light neutrinos which may again, prove everything we know to be false. As scientists and artists, we manufacture different flavors of milk-lies. But in the end, they are all lies, beautiful lies but lies nonetheless.</p>

<p>But what’s so good about lies anyway? Well, when I was younger, I liked to escape into the lie of Hogwarts. In my bedroom, I sat in the stands, cheering for Gryffindor as Harry zoomed past me on his broomstick, chasing an invisible speck of gold. I stood classroom, poking my wand at a teapot, trying to make it dance. I ate in the Great Hall, staring at ceiling that whirled and mimicked the night clouds outside. When I read the books, the magical world of Harry Potter briefly existed to me. I find that Art is compelling because it is the creation and temporary realization of a magnificent lie through a painting, novel, piece of music or whatever medium one fancies. By making the lie real, we live and dream at the same time for we need dreams to feed our souls.</p>

<p>I believe Plato was wrong. Knowledge is not a ‘justified true belief’ because “Truth” is like an imaginary fish. It cannot be caught. Knowledge is believed lies. It doesn’t matter if we categorize ourselves as artists, scientists, economists, writers, historians, or clowns because it does not matter whether we make poems, research papers, novels, or Play-DohTM sculptures. We are liars and we make lies. But lies are beautiful, for they are alive. If all we had were absolute truths, we wouldn’t be able to argue, interpret, and express different opinions about things. And that is why I love lies.</p>

<p>(Please don’t re-read my essay almost always replacing the word ‘lies’ with ‘made-up ideas’)</p>

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<p>I am not sure if anybody has done something like this before. If they have, please pm me a link to the relevant forum post!</p>

<p>I applied RD and was waitlisted.</p>

<p>Essay Option 3: Spanish poet Antonio Machado wrote, ‘Between living and dreaming there is a third thing. Guess it.’ Give us your guess.</p>

<p>It seems like everyone takes advantage of the good spirit in the air around Christmastime. Kids use it to convince their parents to buy them the newest gadget, parents use it to spend time with their kids (who are most likely playing on their gadgets), and networks like Hallmark and Lifetime take advantage of people’s heightened states of euphoria to telecast awful holiday-themed movies with mediocre acting and cheesy plots. I arrived at this conclusion one night as I was watching A Diva’s Christmas Carol, which, as I’m sure you have guessed, is yet another spin-off of A Christmas Carol. As the movie progressed and Ebony Scrooge, the wildly successful yet bitter popstar, meets with her Ghosts of Christmases Past, Present, and Future, it occurred to me that as a senior halfway through her final year of high school, I could somewhat relate to Ebony (though unfortunately not in the “widely successful popstar” manner).
It is ironic how at the time when it is most important for us to keep ourselves grounded in the present, it has never been more difficult to do so. Each day we travel from our homes, which we are dying to leave, to Tualatin High School, which we are dying to leave even more. It is a vicious cycle that has continued for three and a half years and we couldn’t be more ready for it to end. If the overall monotony of our lives wasn’t bad enough, factor in the college search. All of us are in a frenzy to find “the college,” the one that will make all the stress and the sleep deprivation worthwhile.
And, to make matters even more difficult, we are still stuck in high school for another few months even after we have found it. As we are being forced to live day-to-day, all we are really thinking about is the future. Our dreams of being adults and having all the benefits that come with the title are that much closer to becoming reality.
Between living in the present and dreaming of the future, there is a third thing: reflecting. As we live in the present, we reflect on the past; as we reflect on the past, we dream of the future. I have found that this reflecting has become more central to my life now than at any other time before. Faced with the reality that I will soon leaving, everything around me is laced with nostalgia. I’ve been pawing through the miscellaneous items under my bed from freshmen year, wondering how the past three years had gone by so fast. The wake-up calls are loud and frequent – the end of the Harry Potter saga that my generation grew up with, the seemingly endless flow of college information letters in the mailbox, and my younger sister’s renovation plans for turning my room into a game room for herself (because apparently, she believes that moving out for college is functionally equivalent to dying).
As I reflect on my past and the idea of time passing becomes a harsher reality, I have grown to appreciate those around me more, especially my family. It’s only when you acknowledge that you’re going to leave that you realize how much you wish you could stay as well. And as I live day-to-day, I am motivated to work harder now by dreaming of how it will be rewarded later. I’m looking at past mistakes to prevent future ones, while preparing myself to not fear making new ones as a new time approaches. Just as Ebony’s Ghosts helped her reach a new level of understanding of herself and those around her, mine have done the same for me.</p>

<p>Aw, Sinora, I really liked yours. It really hit home :)</p>