<p>I’d try to make it more detailed than the words in brackets. Also, it’s easy to ask for something without whining. </p>
<p>Example:</p>
<p>Hi, [Admissions Person] I am [swimmy] <em>explain situation of currently being matriculated at MIT</em></p>
<p>I understand that the class has already been closed, but I really feel that I would be a good fit for Caltech because of [x,y,z]. I also feel that I could really contribute to Caltech in these ways: [a,b,c]. Again, I understand if nothing can be done but I am willing to do anything in my power to get the opportunity to attend Caltech.</p>
<p>etc.</p>
<p>Re: thanking me: I was once a prefrosh too.</p>