<p>I just signed up to collegeconfidential right now so that I could ask to read your essay. XD Please kindly send it! I’m in a critique-ing mood right now, so I’ll be sure to get back to you as soon as I finish reading it. :3</p>
<p>Thanks for your helpful comments.</p>
<p>I wrote on that same topic. I’m curious how stepping on leaves was a risk/dilemma.
PM it over.</p>
<p>such a unique topic
pm me if you like</p>
<p>I would love to read it! I love editing, and your topic sounds awesome. PM it over? :)</p>
<p>I didn’t get it, how come you didn’t send it to me!!</p>
<p>Bump sent it out.
Please respond people!</p>
<p>Id like to read it too! Can u send me it?</p>
<p>I know that prompt, what school are you applying to?
It is a really good essay but its relation with the prompt is not very clear. And I got the feeling that it was short because the whole thing sort of revolved around a stepping on leaves. The essay could use a bit of editing before it can be called extraordinary. But don’t worry, I’m sure the ADcoms would love it. great topic</p>
<p>Bump 10 char.</p>
<p>I’ll critique it if you’d like.</p>
<p>sounds good!! you can pm it to me if you need help</p>
<p>I’d love to read this. I’ll try and give some constructive feedback.</p>