<p>lauren…what are u talking about…if it fits within one page…why would u have to cut it down…my essay is also like 850 words and i was worrying…but umm a lot of people told me that their essay was like 800 words and they got into like the top ivies…dont worry dear…like everyone has been saying…if its interesting …then go with it.dont let it loose substance…GL with everything!</p>