<p>Your examples were definitely well-developed- but they would’ve been better if they were real life examples. Gramatically, your essay was errorless- so that’s good! But I honestly don’t know what I’d give it on a scale, you should’ve developed things a bit more with a thesis, your ending was perfect though! It would’ve scored nicely- would you mind grading mine? I’d appreciate any feedback at all
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