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What SAT score is considered to be relatively high

Has today’s abundance of information only made it more difficualt for us to understand the world aroud us?

Essay:
Long ago life was more like a wrapped, mysterious box. By time, however, people were able to open that box with knowledge, yet they found more small boxes that were harder to open. The abundance of information today made it easier for us to open these boxes and understand the complicated, mysterious world around us.

Life has not been always like an opened book, so clear and understandable.Infact, there were many things that seemed inexplicable only years back.For example, the DNA. The DNA was like batman under his costume;so mysterious yet does miracles.We werent going to know all the information we know about the DNA and what it does except by books heavy with knowledge and the abundance of information we have today. Therefore, the abundance of information made the world easier to understand, like an opened book.

Another thing that is vitally important and that we werent going to know about without the help of knowledge we have today and it’s guidance is the sun. The solar system has the sun that lights our days and the moon that lights our nights. But, were we going to understand such complicated matter without sufficient knowledge?Infact, no.
Without an abundance of knowledge we were not going to be enlightened about what lightens our lives. Thats why abundance of knowldge made our complicated world easier to comprehend.

Last but not least, an abundance of information, certainly did help open many locked doors in the human mind. Inaddition, it helped uncover much of life’s mysteriousness. Without this abundance of knowledge we were not going to know all about the presice, complicated matters of life. Infact we were going to be blinded by ignorance.

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Depends where you’re applying to. Generally, anywhere in the 1800-2200+ is considered relatively high.

Your examples are quite vague; be more specific! Instead of talking about “DNA,” perhaps talk about genome sequencing or the fact that we can nowadays identify diseases or disorders by looking at insertions or mutations in the chromosomes, etc. Your example with the solar system is also vague.

Additionally, there are multiple spelling and grammatical errors (“In fact” is two words, should be “its guidance,” and “precise”).

I’d probably give it a 3 (out of 6).

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Sure will take all what u said into consideration.
Thank you very much for your feedback as well .