@TheEssayGuy I thank you so much for your recommendation also. I don’t plan to write an entire long paragraph on it. I just want to mention it in passing and then focus most of my essay on other things such as how I grow and my achievement. Nevertheless, since you are a professional essay editor, I’ll trust your words.
What if instead I wrote that I know someone close to me who suffer from it and that motivates me? This is also true. And I won’t mention about my trauma at all, but more about the person I love and then generalise it to other women in my country who struggle for equal rights.