Ok, lesson learned. And yes, you’re right- I figured I may as well use some vocab and get some feedback on its usage if I’m getting feedback anyway, I quite enjoy being experimental.
Because the limit on this is 100 words, I don’t want to turn this into an essay regarding my extra curriculars. My school influenced me more than that, and they can see what I’ve done on my CommonApp anyway- at least, that’s my line of thinking, I am very ignorant on how these applications/essays are reviewed. Essentially, I’m little unsure as to how to get a message across without spending 50% of it on one thing and 50% on another.
Thank you! 