<p>@heinochus: The words occurred naturally, and I just read a few other Chicago applicant’s essay and I think my vocabulary exploitation is equivalent to theirs.</p>
<p>And I don’t think my family or most of my friends would be of much help with my essays. They’d rather have me follow the age-old tradition of ‘I AM AWESOME’ essays!</p>
<p>@Mudskipper: I think my parents would come up with the same adjectives for my supplement essay.
I am trying my best to cut the controversial part! It is around 690 words…condense enough?</p>