@gibby Yeah, I think you are right; maybe admissions officers captured that tone my application. However, it was never of my intention to do so; I was merely inexperienced to know that they will not charge me on basis of my school and thus tried compensating for my weak activities by showing myself in the best possible light. I even tried to convey in my essays my realization that I still have a lot to learn by saying that I will (quoted from the essay) “hoping for…and will keep working to understand…”. I am really sad that I ruined my chance at my dream college by my inexperience, but I gotta move on. Will you have the time to read my essay and tell me whether I should change it as not to ruin my chances at other colleges by coming with the same tone?
As a side-note, if I unintentionally spoke to anyone on CC in a way that conveyed that I am superior to them or anything similar, then I am really sorry–just know that I never meant it.