<p>I thoroughly enjoyed both your opening and your closing sentences. Your opening is intriguing and makes me want to continue reading. Your ending leaves me with the feeling that you have more to say. Excellent. You are off to a great start. However, I would rewrite the central paragraph to reveal a little more about yourself. After all, while they’re asking where you’ve lived, aren’t they really asking how where you have lived has impacted your life? Otherwise, you could just list your three addresses. Is your current home also in Florida? How has living in Florida made you who you are? How is living in Florida different from living in MA or ID? Maybe the Florida sun that cured your jaundice could be linked in again–quickly, of course–later? The apartment/house distinction could be important. Is it? You have “an array of memories and relationships.” What kind of memories and relationships? Did these relationships shape you as a person? In what way? Why are they important to you? You have an opportunity to say something that makes you stand out and dazzle them with what a thoughtful/insightful person you are. This is a short essay, so you will have to be a wordsmith to accomplish all of this, I know. You could leave this just the way it is and be more than fine, but if you have the time, why not make the central paragraph as creative and intriguing as your opening and closing?</p>