<p>I need more help organizing my sentences than working on an essay. I mean i’ve written plenty of essays for school. It’s just that in individual paragraphs, my sentences don’t connect that well (possibly because I have a very limited vocabulary and therefore a limited number of connectives that come to mind when I want them to). and the sentences themselves are odd and muddled. If I could improve this, I would have no trouble writing essays. I’ve had plenty of training and practice in organizing essays. Maybe I’ll post one of them to show you as an example. Actually, nevermind. I don’t feel comfortable about having that essay on this forum.</p>