<p>Add me to the sylvan8798 and PATheatreMom crowd. I just re-read the chapters “Esteban” and “Uncle Pio” and the timeline is driving me crazy:</p>
<p>1) When Manuel dies, Camila is still an actress. We know this because Esteban, in his grief, goes to see her in her dressing-room at the theatre.</p>
<p>2) Esteban’s erratic, grief-stricken behavior lasts for a few months. We know this because of the reference to the Abbess: “For months she had been asking herself what strategy could reconcile this half-demented boy to living among them again” (p. 58). She hits on the brilliant idea of contacting Captain Alvarado.</p>
<p>3) Captain Alvarado seeks out Esteban promptly. We know this because Esteban tells him that Manuel died “just a few weeks ago.” (It was actually a few months ago per the Abbess quote above, but Manuel’s grief is still so fresh that the mistake is understandable.) They leave for Lima the next day and Esteban crosses the bridge and dies.</p>
<p>4) The Perichole: Now it gets screwy. Don Jaime is at least seven years old when he crosses the bridge with Esteban. (“Don Jaime, at seven years, was a rachitic little body…”) By the time her son is that old, Camila has retired from acting, has learned to read and write a little, and is doing some serious social climbing. She and Don Jaime walk about the town together in fancy clothes, “Camila wondering when the felicity would begin that she had always associated with social position.”</p>
<p>5) And then Camila gets smallpox –- and Don Jaime still hasn’t crossed the bridge with Esteban! This means that Wilder’s timeline is off by years. </p>
<p>Think about it: Esteban visits Camila the alluring Actress and then he crosses the bridge and dies a few months later. He dies alongside the son of Camila the stout, scarred NON-Actress, who has spent the previous five years in retirement, bettering her social station, learning to read and write, and contracting and recovering from smallpox. (“Camilla was about thirty when she left the stage and it required five years for her to achieve her place in society,” p. 85). </p>
<p>Am I missing something? If I’m not, then why is this acceptable? Does the beauty of the writing and the depth of the themes excuse a botched plot structure? There has been so much written about The Bridge of San Luis Rey, but I’ve perused article after article and I can’t find this addressed. If there were an error of this sort in a modern novel, we would be merciless critics, wouldn’t we?</p>