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<p>yo, pm me, ill give you my thoughts</p>

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<p>i can give you useful advice/critique it.pm if you want</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to read it over as well.</p>

<p>By the way, although you’re focusing on Wharton, it’s probably also worth keeping in mind that Penn’s separate schools are very integrated–so it may be an idea to keep the ‘big picture’ as well (though I’m not sure how ‘narrow’ you’ve framed it)</p>

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<p>PM me too please~</p>

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<p>I’m bored at work… PM me:)</p>

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<p>PM me. I"ll read it.</p>

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<p>im interested. PM me please</p>

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<p>sure pm me too</p>

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<p>You can send it to me; I’m not applying to Penn.</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look</p>

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<p>Haha it looks like you have all the help you need… I’m super curious though so I’m volunteering just in case :)</p>

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<p>if you still need some more feedback just pm me.</p>

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<p>lol i say find 5 qualified people that know you and maybe have one of the people on this thread read it (the credible ones)</p>

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<p>Due to the size of the thread…ill give it a shot. PM me if you need any advice.</p>

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<p>PM it to me…il take a look</p>

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<p>i’ll read-pm me</p>

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<p>id be happy to read…pm me</p>

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<p>i’ll be glad to help! PM me please :)</p>

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<p>if for any reason u need a 40th opinion, im here for u…pm if u please</p>

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<p>Pm me plzz</p>