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<p>Thanks for the reply. I am aware that most people go for multiple examples. In writing mine, though, I was trying to follow the format put forward here: </p>

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<p>where it is possible to have a single example, discussed in two paragraphs. I am really confused by all the different claims and opinions out there. Everyone seems to agree that the essay should be long, and this is as long as I can go, but to write 2-3 examples I have to divide my limited time up too much, I think. Thanks for the advice though. Appreciated.</p>