<p>I’d give it an 8-9.</p>
<p>-Lots of grammar mistakes i.e. run on sentences</p>
<p>-Not a lot of sentence diversity; need to vary sentence structure more</p>
<p>-Examples not developed that well; your telling, but not exactly showing how.</p>
<p>I dunno. Got a 10 on my SAT in June, but haven’t looked at SAT since. So don’t take my word for it. Just an opinion from what I remember about SAT essays.</p>