<p>^^^ I would agree with @osasmom . @lisaol, perhaps your daughter should rely on the teacher that knows her the best in order to best help her reveal herself to Brown.</p>
<p>I know my own daughter put her heart and soul in to both the Common App essay and the Brown supplement in an honest, straight-forward style. She worked very hard on it, utilizing all the time allowed to revise, reflect, repeat through at least twenty or so iterations. </p>