<p>The car flipped over twice - geez, that’s incredible… I think you should write about that, but you have to showcase it in the right way. Not sympathetic, definitely.</p>
<p>I don’t think you could fit all of that into an engaging essay - it’d just sound like you were spurting out information about your life. IMO don’t talk about how your parents gave up so much to come here, because too many kids will do that… it’s overplayed. Pick something more unique. </p>
<p>I think the car thing is incredible - use it as a metaphor or something.</p>