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<p>For all RDers, we should all take this to heart; no one is perfect in writing essays. This essay clearly has flaws such as the fact that there are no specifics. Yet, his engaging tone, his flow, his creativity, was a factor in him being accepted. Our essays are no different; I guarantee you mine has several errors that could be remedied. Yet, even though we take the best steps to fix them, we, as human, will still have flawed essays. My point is, your essays, while maybe not as creative, will still be very very well written, provided you put all your effort into them. So don’t sweat it! Do the best you can in your own normal tone and voice, give them to people to give constructive criticism and I guarantee you, your essays will be very very well written.</p>