Yeah after I posted and went back to re-read the essays after calming down a little, I realized these two essays are really bad and that I should’ve worked harder or at least asked my teachers to revise it a few more times before I submitted or even found this sight to help me build up an amazing essay. Penn is still my dream school and I guess there is still a chance for me to get in next year by transferring, I hope you and others will help me through this process next year so that I will hopefully be able to transfer in! Thank you for your reply!