<p>this is response #1 right? ok here it is:
Ever since the age of five, coming to Rochester has always been a pleasure and trip of excitement. Because I have family in Rochester, I could always look forward to every summer. Every vacation I have had, I have either come to Rochester or India, and, the trips to Rochester are much more than those to India. These trips were not only memorable, but educational. During my early years, I would spend time with my cousins, aunts and uncles either reading books from the local library, traveling to the nearest Wegmans, or Wiggles Concerts in Downtown Rochester, I would always enjoy the trips. This rich experience in the Rochester area led me to my decision to look at University of Rochester. After doing some research and spending time with the Rochester Cardiopulmonary Group, and especially with Dr. Rao, an assistant professor at University of Rochester, I was able to realize what a great staff there was at the University. When shadowing Dr. Rao, I was able to not only get exposure to the medical field, but also learn cardiovascular medicine. Being an active learner, I picked up quickly as Dr. Rao explained medical terminology, diagnosis, treatment, as well as following up. Based on Dr. Raos excellent methods of teaching, I was able to make my decision to continue my education at University of Rochester.</p>