Yalies: how did you make your essays awesome?

<p>My biology teacher helped configure my essay; she said that it was one of the most bizarre essays that she’s ever read and that the essence of my personality in that paper really made it vibrant. Although, I’m not really sure if my bizarreness is a good thing (still crossing my fingers and praying that I get accepted) I’m sure that Yale is looking for an essay that will give them a general feel of you and your personality. I’m sure that if you write something that shows your true colors that it will be captivating. I compared my progress to a degenerate of natural selection (it was a strange metaphor) if it helps. Good luck.</p>