2nd draft of an essay-looking for comments!

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<p>This is the 2nd draft of my “Christina’s World” essay, and I really need critiques. If any of you could help me out, I’d be very greatful. I’ll PM it to you.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>Sure, you can pm it to me.</p>

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<p>Sent it. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>PM also !..</p>

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<p>I sent you a pm back…</p>