3 more days to SAT! Grade my essay please :D

<p>First, i would like to thank you guys for even clicking on my thread! I hope this essay doesn’t disappoint!</p>

<p>Assignment: It is better to be underrated by people than to be overrated by them. Discuss.</p>

<p>Human judgement is naturally flawed or erroneous. We tend to either overestimate or underestimate ourselves and even our adversaries. As a result, our judgement usually leads to an unexpected or unprecedented turn of events. When an individual gets overrated, the onus is on him to perform. under the scrutiny of the people with inflated hopes of his abilities. Underestimating one’s foe can also lead to catastrophe and ultimately defeat.</p>

<p>Fernando Torres, commonly known as “El nino” was a rising Spanish football star after his emphatic performance in his first year as Liverpool Football Club’s star striker. He netted 35 goals in one season, second only to Cristiano Ronaldo of Manchester United Football Club. Soon after, he was bagged by Chelsea Football Club for a hefty transfer fee of 50million pounds. The pressure on him to provide the spark for the recently beleaguered Chelsea got the better of him. The fans were alarmed as his dismal performance for the club and he only managed to find the back of the net once during his time with Chelsea. Once revered as one of Barclay’s Premier League’s top striker, the hope that was pinned on him eventually led to his demise. He was by far the most overrated player and the worst deal Chelsea Football Club had made in recent years. Both player and club paid dearly for the flawed judgement.</p>

<p>Underestimating one’s foe can also lead to dire consequences. The Greek siege on Troy was a long and drawn out one, which lasted a staggering 10 years. Neither side was able to gain the upperhand in the war. The people of Troy placed their confidence in their strong, fortified walls which virtually proved impenetrable to the Greek Army and were starting to become complacent, coming to a conclusion that the Greeks would eventually give up. They underestimated the shrewdness of their foe. Before the Greek Army eventually sailed away, the Greeks created a subterfuge in the form of a prodigious wooden horse mistaken by the people of Troy as a token of surrender. They dragged the wooden horse into the city as an emblem of their victory in the siege. That night, while the people of Troy celebrated their victory, 30 Greek men emerged from the wooden horse and opened the city gates. The Greek army, which sailed back under the cover of night poured into the city and soon overran it. Troy’s underestimation of their foe led to the end of its era.</p>

<p>Being underrated can bring about many benefits and surprises. However, it is important to note that it too has its drawbacks. One might be starved of opportunity to shine. With this “disadvantaged position”, it is all about playing one’s cards right. He must have the tenacity and sagacity to break away from the label. If done properly, he will prove his detractors wrong and be like a bright shining star, basking in resplendent glory.</p>

<p>someone please give me feedback! Your feedback is greatly appreciated. Be it good or bad :D</p>

<p>is the question too boring? =/ No one seems to want to read my essay awww…</p>

<p>You had good evidence and writing, but there was one major problem–you didn’t pick a side. from what i read, you pointed out the bad sides to both over- and under- estimating. the SAT doesn’t want you to analyze both sides, it wants you to choose a side and support it.</p>

<p>hi catcat18 thanks for reading! Actually i did pick a side! My first example showed how overrating someone can lead to his downfall and my 2nd example showed how underestimating someone will lead to their own downfall! Essentially being overrated is worse than being underrated. However, i must agree my stand might be a little blurred? What do you think?</p>

<p>Oh, okay. i was confused but now I see… yeah it makes a lot more sense now. :)</p>

<p>My suggestion to make your point clearer by making the subject of the paragraphs more consistent. What I mean is, instead of talking about the negative effect of underestimation on Troy, you could talk about the positive effect of underestimation on the Greeks. that way, you’ll be talking about the bad of being overestimated and the good of being underestimated, rather than the bad of overestimation and the bad of underestimating your opponents. (do I make sense or am I crazy? I can’t tell…)</p>

<p>HAHA I dont blame you. My second point is actually showing how underestimating your opponent will lead to your demise. There is no way i can put in though. Using the Greek’s perspective would be kind of silly because they couldnt have overestimated their opponents to win. What really happened was their opponents underestimated them! So it’s kinda like 2 points of view. One is that the person being overestimated gets the shorter end of the stick, whilst the other is saying that the person being underestimated gets the upperhand! Anyway i got my friend to read. He took a while to understand. Haha. Maybe i should simplify the essay by providing other examples. But i couldnt think of any in the 25minutes!</p>

<p>anyone else? comments please!</p>

<p>someones definitely not a chelsea fan…lol! nt bad though</p>

<p>HAHA. Yea actually im a liverpool fan. so GOOD RIDDANCE! XD</p>