<p>425 words…Can you guys please give me your honest criticism? Please say yes so I can send it over.</p>
<p>Sure I can read it</p>
<p>PM it over, I’ll give a thorough review.</p>
<p>PM it, i’m bored rite now…it’s 2am over here…i can criticise an essay lol</p>
<p>If you want anybody else to read it, I’m free. :P</p>