499-word o_0 Esssay for Yale SCEA

College Essays
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<p>Hi there!</p>

<p>I currently work in my university’s admission department. Although I don’t have a say in the admission decision, I know how they operate and could give you an honest opinion if your essay works or not. I wouldn’t mind reading it and proofing it either. Please email it to <a href="mailto:marc.d.tan@gmail.com">marc.d.tan@gmail.com</a>. I look forward to reading your essay!</p>

<p>PS just a suggestion, although colleges want it to be trimmed down to 500, they will read anything you send them word for word. Although they might get mad if you send a 1200 word essay, the admissions office is entitled to read every word of your essay. After all, you did pay a $70 application fee.</p>

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<p>Guys, thank you so much for your interest, but I really only expected a couple of people respond and I’m having trouble keeping track of who said what and how many people are looking at my essay. I’m so sorry, but I think I have enough help I can handle :slight_smile: Blame me and my inability to cope with multiple things.</p>

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<p>Sounds interesting! I would love to help you! =D</p>

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<p>PM me if you’d like!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it if you want. just pm me.</p>

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<p>I can read it for you if you want, PM me.</p>