A Couple of Writing Q's

<p>Can you guys help me with the following? Thanks!</p>

<p>By employing exotic harmonies and making unusual use of instruments, [Mahler was a pathfinder] from romanticism to modern music.
(A) Mahler was a pathfinder
(B) a path was created by Mahler
(C) Mahler created a path
(D) Mahler was the creator of a path
(E) was how Mahler created a path</p>

<p>Some plants use chemical signals [that repel] insects, and [also, these] signals help to put neighboring plants on alert [so they can] [mount their own defenses.]</p>

<p>[Despite] the attorney’s moving plea, the judge [placed] the juvenile offender [on] probation for an [indecisive] period.</p>

<p>(C) Mahler created a path</p>

<p>[also, these]</p>

<p>No error (I think)</p>

<p>the error w/ the third is with “indecisive” That doesn’t make any sense. “indeterminate” is a better fit.</p>

<p>The answer for number 1 isn’t (E)…</p>

<p>Thanks for explaining number 3. It makes sense now. Can someone explain number 2 and 1?</p>

<p>I got B for no2. Dunoo… maybe it just sounds weird.</p>

<p>No1 C</p>

<p>No3 indecisive should be undetermined</p>

<p>Sorry I meant that number 1 isn’t (C).</p>

<p>‘By employing harmonies and making creative use’, is an introductory adverbial construction. It modifies a verb telling how something was done. C. contains the verb “created”. The adverb construction tells how he created the path.</p>

<p>Who employed the harmonies etc.? Mahler. Therefore, “Mahler created” is the most direct relationship between the adverbial construction and the idea of the sentence.</p>

<p>A leaves the adverb modifier without a verb to modify
B changes the subject of the sentence from Mahler to ‘path’.
C is correct.
D while technically also correct, it is wordy, less direct, and substitutes a weak linking verb ‘was’ for an active verb ‘created’.
E The phrase “was how…” is a sentence fragment lacking a subject. The introductory adverb construction seems to be the intended subject, but an adverb can’t be a subject. Mahler is not the subject of the main clause, “was how…”. Mahler is the subject of the noun clause “how Mahler created a path”. The noun clause acts as the predicate complement of the linking verb ‘was’ in ‘was how’.</p>

<p>and (also these) would contain redundant ideas…and, also…</p>