<p>im taking PSAT 2moro and am really nervous, pls help me by grading my essay?
"Dear ladies and GentleMen of the CollegeBoard founded in 1930 by Gaston Caperton to aid and promote high school students to provide standardized tests to promote intellectual aquitity, welcome, to my essay.</p>
<p>I bid you take a seat and enjoy my essays, [sic, added an extra s ]</p>
<p>First off, mistakes are bad. Imagine a world where people make mistakes. Imagine a world where the government is unable to not make mistakes. Imagine a world. Now stop imagining that world, because this world which exists is our world. Now, I ask of you, is this a good world? Is this a good world? “world is good?” as yoda would say. In the movie Star Wars. Yoda is a master who made mistakes. However, he was able to teach luke skywalker about his mistakes so in this case mistakes were good.</p>
<p>Secondly, mistakes are good because they help people. Picture the dog on the side of the street falling down while he is falling he will not fall again because he is learning. In addition, in the book “BFG by Roald Dahl” the BFG makes mistakes such as eating Chillean Beans, which are humans in disguise. However, he admits this mistake, and doesn’t eat humans but instead eats other things. It is very interesting book, I liked it."</p>
<p>To begin with: the PSAT doesn’t have an essay; however, the SAT does so it isn’t necessarily bad to practice.</p>
<p>I recommend removing the introduction, to be honest. I don’t think it will win over any graders… and try not to start with ‘first off’, you need something better for your first sentence. Perhaps others can give more tips or I’ll give some later.</p>
<p>I really, really, do not post often, but I HAVE to do it now.</p>
<p>I, personally, hope that this essay is a prank or something, just to see what people would say.</p>
<p>First of all, you used a double negative: "… is UNable to NOT make mistakes. "</p>
<p>Second of all, what kind of introduction is that? An introduction is where you state your thesis, NOT where you introduce yourself to the people who will grade the essay!
And let us say that this is the “perfect” introduction, why in the world would you add “…founded in 1930 by Gaston Caperton…” It’s as if you were trying to, obviously, kiss up to them, so they would go easy on the grading.</p>
<p>Lastly, as said by others, there are no ESSAYS IN THE PSAT!</p>