A FoB's College essay for Gerogia Tech

College Essays
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<p>Hi College Confidential. Would anyone like to read my college essay? I am pretty satisfied with my content, but I don’t know if it stands out in a college’s point of view. I need some feedback. Reply and I will PM you my essay. Please criticize me if you find something you think I can improve upon.</p>

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<p>no one wants to read my essay?:(</p>

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<p>A “FOB”? Haha me too!
PM me. I’ll read it. :]</p>

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<p>ok I will pm you :)</p>

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<p>I really need more feedback :3</p>

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<p>anyone else want to read my essay? I will read yours too. PM me</p>

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<p>last time bump</p>

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<p>Haha, okay. PM me if you want another opinion!</p>