A little help on the common app essay please :)

<p>Hi everyone! I am choosing to answer the first question for the essay:</p>

<p>"Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you."</p>

<p>I would love to pm you about my idea.</p>

<p>Thanks so much, and I'd be happy to comment on any of your essays!</p>

<p>sure, pm me your idea</p>

<p>you can pm me too</p>

<p>you can pm me too. I'm doing the second topic (discuss some issue of personal, local national, or international conern and its importance to you) and I was wondering if someone can help me out on that. I have an idea and a rough draft done but it seems too simple compared to some of the other application essays i've read in books.</p>