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<p>Would anyone read my application essay? I will certainly do yours back. : D</p>

<p>I wrote it long in the hope that people would be willing to critique it and cut bits out. It would be preferable if I could email it to you and you could correct it using the “track changes” tool in MS Word/Open Office. If you send me an email, attach your own essay and we can trade. Savvy?</p>

<p>Have a great day!
–Jenna
(<a href="mailto:onbroooadway@hotmail.com">onbroooadway@hotmail.com</a>)</p>

<p>Really, nobody?</p>

<p>I’ve cut it down a little, it shouldn’t be too hard to read and review. Look, I’m not even asking that you do it in MS Word anymore.</p>

<p>PM me.10char</p>