<p>Would any parent be willing to critique a 500-word passage that I wrote? It’s not for application but just one that I wrote in my spare time after reading some stories about witch hunts. I’d like to receive some feedback in regard to my description. My English teacher is very lenient and nice so she always encourages me to write. But I’d like to see whether I actually have the potential to pursue creative writing further. </p>
<p>I am looking forward to hearing from you.</p>
<p>Edit: I also have a more “naive” one (also approximately 500 words) reminiscing about the years passed by. This one is lighter whereas the first one is darker. </p>
<p>Thanks.</p>