? about UC ESSAY #3!

Ok for topic number 3 on the UC prompt… is there anything you would like us to know about you or your academic record…, and I want to write about something that has to do with my background (immigrating here when i was young) but it seems so redudant? and trite considering so many people are asian at the UC’s and prob write about that!

So… would it be ok if I wrote my leadership position at the hospital (basically volunteering/leadership) if my 600 word essay was on teaching kids at the aquarium during summer (internship/volunteering)… (basically talk about 2 diff. volunteering activities for essay 2 and 3)? thanks!

<p>Hey let me see ur essay than i’ll say weather it’s write or wrong!!!</p>