Accepted to Vanderbilt, USC, UNC, etc. PM me for essay (transfer)

College Essays
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<p>Stats:</p>

<p>Current School: CUNY
Entering as: Junior
High School GPA: 3.1
College GPA: 3.77 (3.8 after Spring)
SAT/ACT Scores: ~2k
SAT II Scores: 750 SAT II US Histoy
Significant ECs: Worked ~25 hours a week in a tech startup. Worked full-time job over the summer at a non-for-profit. Created a holocaust movie. VP of Student Government, VP of Political Club, Fellowship at Hillel, Philanthropy Chair at Alpha Epsilon Pi, Financial Literacy Volunteer.
Hooks: Honors student, received recc. from my tech startup boss who graduated Harvard +Wharton in top 5%
US/Intl: New York applicant</p>

<p>Applied to: WashU, Vanderbilt, UCLA (econ), UCB(econ), UMiami, USC, UPenn, UNC-CH
Accepted: Vanderbilt, UNC-CH, UMiami, USC
Rejected: WashU, UCLA, UCB, UPenn</p>

<p>Likely attending: Vanderbilt</p>

<p>Comments: Straight A’s except 1 C in 4 credit bio first semester. A little disappointed about UPenn…probably due to mediocre 3rd essay.</p>

<p>I will PM you my CA essay if you ask or pm me.</p>

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<p>im interested PM me please</p>

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<p>Congrats.
Please, PM the CA essay, I am interested to read it.</p>

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<p>Wow Congrats, I have a similar gpa and would be thrilled for such results. Could you please pm me your CA essay.</p>

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<p>I’m interested. PM please?</p>

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<p>I’m quite interested please PM me…</p>

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<p>sent you all PM’s…I wouldnt mind comments lol</p>

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<p>Impressive. This really shows that regardless of high school record, if you work hard in college, you can wind up at an elite private.
I’d be interested in the essay as well. Mind pm’ing it?</p>

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<p>I’m interested in your essay and the holocaust movie. Could you pm me both?</p>

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<p>im interested PM me.</p>

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<p>that’s awesome. I’m a junior looking at colleges currently and would really like to read the essay. would you mind pm’ing it?</p>

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<p>I’d like to see it :)</p>

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<p>sent you all PMs.</p>

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<p>I’m interested in the essay, congratulations on your acceptances!</p>

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<p>PM please?</p>

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<p>please PM. I would really like to read your essay!</p>

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<p>Congratulations! I’d love to see your essay</p>

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<p>I would appreciate if you would show me the essay! Pm Please? :D</p>

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<p>I’d like to see it! PM me please</p>

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<p>If you wouldn’t mind sending it to one more person. I’d appreciate</p>