Activity Essay. Want to read it?

College Essays
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<p>It’s a nice 157 words (which took a lot of trimming) about being on my newspaper staff.
Please tell me if you think the last line is a little too corny, if there are any grammatical errors, you’re overall impression, or if you think I should take this in another direction.</p>

<p>I’ll only send it to those who are already in college or I am sure are not applying to colleges I am interested in. </p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>Sure, just pm me. I’m in JHU alrdy, no problems there.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I was on my newspaper staff.</p>

4

<p>PM me and I’ll read it/ respond.</p>

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<p>sure! i’ll take a look. (PM)</p>