Briefly explain (in 50-100 words), how you decided which activity was the most important to you.
My experiences in my high school orchestra class has had a profound impact on me. Although I have been in orchestra since 4th grade, high school was when I started to realize the valuable life lessons it has taught me.
Not complete of course, but I really need to add more here and I’m just not sure. Can someone help me make this statement better?
UPDATE:
“My experiences in my high school orchestra class has had a profound impact on me. Throughout early schooling, I struggled with my academic classes. As soon as I started to play my violin, it sparked something in my brain which allowed me to exceed in my academics rather than struggle; it built my self confidence, for had to play loud in order to lead my section in the right direction. Orchestra gave me a strong foundation to build myself into the strong, independent, and confident woman I am today, which is why orchestra means the most to me.”